1. Love
he loves her.
he told her this
as he twisted her hair
around his fingers
until it hurt
she loves him.
it was sticky and humid
when she told him
under a eucalypt
much older then the two of them
he looked dead in her eyes
when he said the three important words.
those three simple syllables
didn't seem enough
for such a heavy burden
when she said she loved him
she looked into her hands
at the soft skin
not yet weathered
by the sandpaper of time
these words made her feel old
not happy and joyous
i love you,
she whispered
and her mind cleared
and her words
sparkled into the sun
2. Cycle
she leaves
but only for a while
she'll be back in a week
he knows this
because she told him
when she hugged him goodbye
she waves back at him
he doesn't wave.
he never does.
but he smiles.
that old smile
inward
guilty
sercret
he turns on one leg
and goes back inside
to watch her from the window
3. In Decisions
she's been gone three days
he thinks of her
even when the girl
he's with tonight
strokes her hair
he can't help it
he says
to others who tell him
what he'd doing is wrong
he's too nice
he thinks
it isn't his decision
it's his lack of...














Comments
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Someone please comment on my photography. ^_^
i appreciate it
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life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass... it's about getting out there and dancing in the rain...
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Again, some spelling mistakes need to be fixed.
I like the continuous story in them, and I think #1. Love is my favourite.
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Someone please comment on my photography. ^_^
#1 Love was the one i wrote last actually... so thanks i didn't know if it was good enough to start the poem.
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life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass... it's about getting out there and dancing in the rain...
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Really, I would've never knew that. The vivid details in it make the poem so good! For example: "when she said she loved him
she looked into her hands
at the soft skin
not yet weathered
by the sandpaper of time"
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Someone please comment on my photography. ^_^
and your so nice
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life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass... it's about getting out there and dancing in the rain...
x
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