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Tell me by ~luvablesteph:iconluvablesteph:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Narrative > Spoken Word


You hide all of your feelings
You never let me see
Just how much your hurting
Please open up to me.

I can see the pain you're feeling
I can see it in you eyes
Please tell me what has happened
Let me hold you as you cry.

You tell me that nothing is wrong
But I know that that's not true
Don't lock it up inside yourself
Let me be there for you.

If you share your problems with me
I can try and do my best
To help you through these hardships
So your pain can be at rest.

You can tell me anythingI wont judge or question you
Any feelings that you tell me
Will be just between us two

What's best for you is what I want
So just tell me what you need
And if one of these things isn't me
Then tell me and I'll leave.
©2005-2009 ~luvablesteph
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Author's Comments

This is a piece of writing which just simply ask everybody to let people know about whats going on don't keep it to yourself when its too hard to cope or your just dying on the inside. Your friends, family, loved ones would know if your changing in attitude, dieting changes or any other seek help and take about it its the best thing....i'm sure they would love to help and simply talk about it ....

i know its hard to tell people what your going through or whats happening- tell someone close, tell someone who cares, who listens and who you can trust... and who you think can give you advise.

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:icontransnationalist:
~Transnationalist Oct 3, 2005, 5:30:16 PM
I like the poem. I think we've all been in a situation where we've known someone is hiding something from us.

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~luvablesteph Oct 3, 2005, 5:45:30 PM
Thankyou i'm glad you, i've always been interested in writing poems and stuff just for fun and with influences in and about my life and its my first to summit it into deviant art so i'm really happy that you like it!
I agree i think everyone has been in situations like that i guess we have to tell them that you're there for them when needed it hard though and fustrating....
i'm babbling along again thanks again i appreciate the comment... :cuddle:

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life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass... it's about getting out there and dancing in the rain...

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:icontransnationalist:
~Transnationalist Oct 3, 2005, 5:48:26 PM
No prob, check out my gallery. Be sure to check out my gallery. You might like some of my poetry.

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Come on click me. [link]
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~luvablesteph Oct 3, 2005, 5:52:26 PM
i'll check out your gallery for sure i'll go onto it right this minute....

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life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass... it's about getting out there and dancing in the rain...

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:iconmnogueir:
~mnogueir Oct 4, 2005, 1:12:13 AM
Very nice, you do have a writing talent! keep on going! :)
:iconluvablesteph:
~luvablesteph Oct 4, 2005, 3:21:15 PM
Thankyou, do you think so? well i'll try and write some more soon ...

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life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass... it's about getting out there and dancing in the rain...

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:iconcoolvamp007:
~coolvamp007 Oct 5, 2005, 5:23:35 PM
That reminds me of a friend I used to have.

Very beautiful poem!

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Regrets are a waste of time. They're the past crippling you in the present.
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~luvablesteph Oct 5, 2005, 7:03:58 PM
yeah same here thats why i've written it... it sad isn't it? when the person youc are about doesn't tell you when something is wrong.... but thankyou for your comment and fav!!! its much appreciated...

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life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass... it's about getting out there and dancing in the rain...

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:iconcoolvamp007:
~coolvamp007 Oct 7, 2005, 1:32:50 PM
Sure, no problem.
Actually, I show your poem to him but he didn't say a word about it, he just avoided the topic. Shame...

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Regrets are a waste of time. They're the past crippling you in the present.
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